Comments on: We apologize for this break in transmission http://robertgodden.wordpress.com/2008/05/18/we-apologize-for-this-break-in-transmission/ I muse. I rant. This is my outlet! Sun, 08 Jun 2008 21:57:22 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Chuck Radcliff http://robertgodden.wordpress.com/2008/05/18/we-apologize-for-this-break-in-transmission/#comment-22 Chuck Radcliff Tue, 20 May 2008 18:31:03 +0000 http://robertgodden.wordpress.com/?p=11#comment-22 I think this is too wordy and a little too negative. You only have the first couple of lines to get someones attention. After that, they will click away. Try a quote (either from the book or from a reviewer). Shorten the message. You are trying to push a book as possitive, try to make your message more positive. What it says to me is your job sucks a lot and no one cares... buy this book... my 2cents... feel free to give back change. I think this is too wordy and a little too negative. You only have the first couple of lines to get someones attention. After that, they will click away. Try a quote (either from the book or from a reviewer). Shorten the message. You are trying to push a book as possitive, try to make your message more positive. What it says to me is your job sucks a lot and no one cares… buy this book…

my 2cents… feel free to give back change.

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